View Full Version : Episode 7: Marathon Men [Discussion]
11-18-2009, 05:13 PM
Having discovered that living with Alex will make him insane, Ray moves in with Nate. Meanwhile, Alex cooks up an idea to play video games for 24 hours straight for the Child's Play charity, broadcasting it via Web cam.
Watch or download now! (http://revision3.com/webzeroes/marathonmen)
11-19-2009, 07:44 PM
they are getting better and better!
LOVE THE HOBO
11-19-2009, 09:35 PM
Best episode yet! Really, really good guys! Keep it up!
11-20-2009, 01:19 AM
Getting better and better.
One suggestion: If you're going to do any more scenes with Ray on the phone, do a test shot with him actually on the phone to someone. Then compare it to the shots in the show - in the show he's way too fast and unnatural. It comes across very much like he's reading a script and there's nobody on the other end (which of course is probably true, but I doubt it's the effect you're looking for). Just my $0.02 in the interest of helping.
More cameos! Can you get ponceman (http://twitter.com/PONCEMAN)?
11-20-2009, 09:24 AM
Agree with ruprecht. In general the Ray character delivers his lines in a very unnatural, scripted way. Needs to loosen up. No need to enunciate every single letter. ;-)
11-22-2009, 05:49 AM
Great episode, however the writers should check their definitions a little more carefully.
penultimate means "second to last" not "the second best".
11-22-2009, 07:52 PM
Ray is a melee huntard? clicking spells? still on BC?