Put to good use

[aden]

Used several Film Riot Effects for my final for a video production class. Wanted to share with everyone. Constructive criticism always welcome.http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bzqquBdwbm8&feature=player_embedded

[nextgenxbox]

:)

Looks like you had a lot of fun making this; which is what matters.

My one critique is to go easy on the text and text effects. Using text is always a tricky thing... less is more when it comes to text.

[mttskates]

good job...my one critique is pace..Speed it up and it could be shorter. Audiences tend to figure out whats going on on the screen fairly quickly..lagged in spots and felt like I was waiting impatiently on delivery...good job tho :)